My work for critique

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Need 'beta readers' or reviewers for your story or novel? by John Yeoman
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by michelle moore
Help-on-Elementary-Arts-Lesson-Plans-Essay by Lorrainejilbert
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by Lorrainejilbert
Hi I wondered if spp members would critique this piece I have done for a local library comp. The brief was write a 500 word prose on anything to do with a bridge (actual bridge or dental bridge; anything) by Alison Rome
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by Bea
Emails by Pat Linum. by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
GHOST BRIDE by peggles
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by e.thoday
Between the Seastrand and the Street (59 words) by Bea
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by peggles
The Roman Remains by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
People Power by peggles
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by peggles
Solo chapter one and two (small chapters) by elizabeth
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by Bea
A CAT CALLED SAM by e.thoday
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by Alison Rome
The Wages... by Pat Linum by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
Bert’s listening by peggles
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by peggles
Help - suggestions wanted. by Heather Marsten
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by Bea
Posted - format help needed by KitKlein
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by peggles
You don't always want what you get by Bayleaf
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by Bayleaf
PEOPLE ARE NOT ALWAYS WHAT THEY SEEM by peggles
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by Bea
Edith the Grey by Alec Poole
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by Alec Poole
Every Cloud by stillmind
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by stillmind
The Unblocked by Pat Linum by Pat Linum
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by peggles
Witsands Bay. 2500 words for hopeful critique for competition use. Thank you! by michelle moore
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by michelle moore
An Funny Thing Happened on My Way to Walmart’s by abit2kish
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by abit2kish
Landing Full in One of the Chairs by abit2kish
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by abit2kish
Opening scene (re-write) The Accountant by stillmind
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by RosannaMarie
The Silverberry Thief Chapter One by Anthea
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by Anthea
Lucky Day-for critique by JLauren
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by JLauren
Meggie's Adventure--NYC by 555gleigh53
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by 555gleigh53
Synopsis for 'The Fool'--I'd love to swap a novel with someone who would be interested in this genre and open to offers with a different genre, if possible please? Any harsh critisism welcome! Thank you. by michelle moore
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by michelle moore
The Fool first chapter by michelle moore
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by michelle moore
Re: Every Cloud/Baal by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
Re: Synopsis for 'The Fool'--I'd love to swap a novel with someone who would ... by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
New story by Raymond Bell by John Yeoman
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by elizabeth
Re-edited version of chapter one of The Fool, after critique. I'd love further eyes casting over this please, if anyone has time? Thank you! by michelle moore
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by michelle moore
Request for critique on foreshadowing/foreghosting by RosannaMarie
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by michelle moore
The Phil Collins Villainy by Bayleaf
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by Bayleaf
Who's who by Pat Linum
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by michelle moore
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