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What do you think? New detective type novel. Chap 1 by rasti17
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by peggles
Part 1 of a fantasy short story by km098
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by John Yeoman
blow the diet by peggles
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by Bea
The brief outline a planned story any thoughts welcome by peggles
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by peggles
Michael (cont) by Karen
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by Karen
Flight of Fancy and Unadulterated Fact (1450 words) by Karen
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by Karen
Mother's Last Walkabout by John Yeoman
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by peggles
Will this opening work? by Simon Leigh
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by peggles
One of two ideas for an intro (this the shortest, the other is over 3,000 words). by jimmy white
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by Bea
ghostly ending by Foldingpen
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by Bea
Skimming - The shortest piece I have written (a while ago) - at 68 words a prose 'Haiku'? by Karen
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by Bea
Trash and Treasures by JLauren
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by JLauren
Michael - Part 1 (Split of single short story) by Karen
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by Foldingpen
part one of option two for intro. by jimmy white
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by jimmy white
Night Nurse by HENRY JOE
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by peggles
NIGHT NURSE PART 2 by HENRY JOE
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by HENRY JOE
verse selection for Mothers Day by peggles
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by peggles
one for the older sweethearts by peggles
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by peggles
Minty and the Raptor (shy of 2000words) by Karen
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by Karen
Big Scoops (words 149) by Karen
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by Karen
The Street Sweeper (under 600 words) by Bea
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by Bea
Big Norm (760 words) All feedback is welcome by Alex Rosel
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by Alex Rosel
Two samples farther into the book, sorry book has no title yet. by jimmy white
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Part two of option two for intro. by jimmy white
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by jimmy white
Love Across a Crowded Room by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
The Smoked Pot -(I have just finished polishing this submission 1500 words) Feedback please? by Karen
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by peggles
Unjust Justice by Julie
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by peggles
Beta reader wanted. by peggles
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by peggles
Re: The Smoked Pot -(I have just finished polishing this submission 1500 word... by Pat Linum
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by Karen
The Baby (2,267 words) by Theo Volschenk
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by Theo Volschenk
The Age of Progress by Karen
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by Karen
new verse by peggles
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by peggles
Hi Everyone, I haven't posted for awhile but would very much appreciate your thoughts on this opening of an Urban fantasy novel I have written. It is one of three books. *I must warn that there is the odd swear word for those who might take offence*For background, the lead character is an ex-cop, now private investigator, who has got himself caught up in the world of supernatural dealings. Thanks by Alison Rome
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The Vicar's Girls (289 Words) by Karen
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by Karen
The Beginning… (267 words) by KF
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by Bea
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