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Section from my WIP by Heather Marsten
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by michelle moore
The Void. 2500 words. I'm aiming to put it in an anthology for my writing class in Salisbury. Thanks! Michelle Moore. by michelle moore
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by michelle moore
Does this therapy session work? by Heather Marsten
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by Heather Marsten
SOLO CHAPTER ONE by elizabeth
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by peggles
Heaven or Hell by peggles
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by peggles
Us By Pat Linum by Pat Linum
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by peggles
Siblings by Pat Linum by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
A GAMBLING MAN by peggles
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by peggles
MY ONE TRUE LOVE. by peggles
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by peggles
A verse for fathers day. by peggles
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by peggles
re-post about grammar. by peggles
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by peggles
Los Angeles Coven experience by Heather Marsten
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by Heather Marsten
Mutiny off the Bounty by Bayleaf
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by Bayleaf
Alyssa & The Secrets of Clayfields by Dead Jester
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by Dead Jester
They by Pat Linum by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
Short story—hoping to enter comps—critique or advice appreciated by Iseult
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by Iseult
THE SOMME REMEMBERED. by peggles
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by peggles
Ghost by Chioma Iwunze-Ibiam by ChiomaIwunzeIbiam
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by peggles
Which One? by Pat Linum
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by e.thoday
Re: A verse for no fathers day. by Pat Linum
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by RosannaMarie
Referendums by Pat Linum by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
assignment 43 by peggles
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by JLauren
Thanknyou everyone for your encouragement by e.thoday
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by RosannaMarie
A Cat Called Sam by e.thoday
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by RosannaMarie
SOLO Chapter ONE AND TWO by elizabeth
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by elizabeth
PHISHING by rasti17
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by John Yeoman
Do Blue Waltz Cowboys Still Roam? by 555gleigh53
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by peggles
This Ability by Louisa Eades
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by Louisa Eades
POLITICAL NOVEL IN PROGRESS by roy chadwick
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by roy chadwick
More of "A Turn of the Cards" by stillmind
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by stillmind
Tail feathers in a Nest by ChiomaIwunzeIbiam
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by ChiomaIwunzeIbiam
Garden Fever by e.thoday
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by peggles
Lines written in aTemper on just missing a bus in the rain by e.thoday
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by peggles
Heaven Sent- a short story by Bayleaf
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by peggles
Susannah's Sunflower by e.thoday
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by peggles
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