My work for critique

Post your ideas - or passages of your work up to 3000 words - here for constructive feedback
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the chapter about Vienna continued (for those interested) by Roma44
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by peggles
Past Lives Reborn - My new story (374words) adjusted by Cholontic
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by Cholontic
Crashes a flash fiction I knocked up by Pat Linum
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by Pat Linum
A sample of the novel I'm writing by HENRY JOE
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by HENRY JOE
I screamed by HENRY JOE
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by HENRY JOE
A piece from a short story called "Awakened Pain" by amandajevans
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by peggles
Next scene of my short story "Clean" by tinawilliams
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by tinawilliams
Beginning of a chapter in a novel about Vienna by Roma44
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by Roma44
Opening of "The Model Wife" (363 words) by KF
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by peggles
Another excerpt from Tommy's story by Gaylynne
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by peggles
No Sense in Love (Ending) by Phill Howlette
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by John Yeoman
Wrote this a few weeks ago - 256 words by KF
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by KF
The beginning of an old story currently being reworked.... by Gaylynne
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by PJ Reece
nAMES by Pat Linum
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by PJ Reece
A small piece from my young adult novel - a work in progress by amandajevans
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by HENRY JOE
Just sitting (36 words) beat that if you can! by Pat Linum
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by Garry Gunnerson
A Story From this Morning by GB
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by GB
Gone Hunting: 380 words by Garry Gunnerson
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by Garry Gunnerson
This is an aritcle for my Writers' Newsletter >>> I'd appreciate feedback. Thanks! by Maria Cox
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by Maria Cox
I am trying to write a short story, this is what I have come up with. by Melodye Collins
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by Melodye Collins
Crashes done now 'Collision' by Pat Linum
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by John Yeoman
Beginning of a short story featuring an android by David Wolf
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by Dogwoman
My stuff is usually pretty short. This is the whole story... by KF
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by Cynthia Harris
200 words of a new short story I am working on by Tori
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by David Wolf
Beginnin of a short story I wrote by tinawilliams
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by Gaylynne
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