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the chapter about Vienna continued (for those interested) by Roma44

by peggles

Past Lives Reborn - My new story (374words) adjusted by Cholontic

by Cholontic

Crashes a flash fiction I knocked up by Pat Linum

by Pat Linum

A sample of the novel I'm writing by HENRY JOE

by HENRY JOE

I screamed by HENRY JOE

by HENRY JOE

A piece from a short story called "Awakened Pain" by amandajevans

by peggles

Next scene of my short story "Clean" by tinawilliams

by tinawilliams

Beginning of a chapter in a novel about Vienna by Roma44

by Roma44

Opening of "The Model Wife" (363 words) by KF

by peggles

Another excerpt from Tommy's story by Gaylynne

by peggles

No Sense in Love (Ending) by Phill Howlette

by John Yeoman

Wrote this a few weeks ago - 256 words by KF

by KF

The beginning of an old story currently being reworked.... by Gaylynne

by PJ Reece

nAMES by Pat Linum

by PJ Reece

A small piece from my young adult novel - a work in progress by amandajevans

by HENRY JOE

Just sitting (36 words) beat that if you can! by Pat Linum

by Garry Gunnerson

A Story From this Morning by GB

by GB

Gone Hunting: 380 words by Garry Gunnerson

by Garry Gunnerson

This is an aritcle for my Writers' Newsletter >>> I'd appreciate feedback. Thanks! by Maria Cox

by Maria Cox

I am trying to write a short story, this is what I have come up with. by Melodye Collins

by Melodye Collins

Crashes done now 'Collision' by Pat Linum

by John Yeoman

Beginning of a short story featuring an android by David Wolf

by Dogwoman

My stuff is usually pretty short. This is the whole story... by KF

by Cynthia Harris

200 words of a new short story I am working on by Tori

by David Wolf

Beginnin of a short story I wrote by tinawilliams

by Gaylynne

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