My work for critique

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Waltzing in Glass slippers by e.thoday
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by peggles
A LION IN THE GARDEN by e.thoday
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by peggles
A rough rough part of a scene from my novel *be gentle* lol by Marieca M
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by Anthea
HER SEASHELLS by RosannaMarie
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by RosannaMarie
Re-write of opening for A Turn Of The Cards by stillmind
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by stillmind
Seething at the Spring Fete by Bayleaf
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by Bayleaf
Best Sausages In Cambridgeshire by Elizabeth by John Yeoman
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by RosannaMarie
Mrs Pomfrey's shoes by percypop
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by roy chadwick
POEM: A Tribute to Florence by e.thoday
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by RosannaMarie
The Fisherman's Wife by e.thoday
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by RosannaMarie
BROWN EYES by RosannaMarie
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by roy chadwick
Chapter1 ? Any Response is a good response! by CMJordan
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by CMJordan
!st Layer to Freedom (condensed CH.1&2) 1000 words by CMJordan
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by CMJordan
Chapter 2 (working title) "The Many Layers to Freedom"? by CMJordan
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by CMJordan
Chapter1? any response...(REVISED) by CMJordan
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by CMJordan
Using Dialogue-for critique by JLauren
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by JLauren
Chapter two. How does it read? by rasti17
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by rasti17
When Rock Bottom isn't really Rock Bottom (Chapter 1?Any response...) by CMJordan
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by Bayleaf
First page of an epic fantasy series. Just a heads up, there are a few curse words, for those who may be offended. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!!! by tommyc1013
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by tommyc1013
The Itch - Part 1 (First 850 words) by Theo Volschenk
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by peggles
Ralph a short story for critique please by Flicker
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by peggles
Sodoff, Waldolf by Bayleaf
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by peggles
A WINNER by e.thoday
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by RosannaMarie
Clearly by Bea
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by CMJordan
Crime - a short story by Bayleaf
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by Bayleaf
Short Story for critique by Bridelia
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by Bridelia
WILL THIS REVISED OPENING WORK? by Simon Leigh
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by Simon Leigh
A True Princess by e.thoday
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by peggles
Never Show Fear 2388 wds by JLauren
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by JLauren
Need critique for Fantasy - Ashes in the Evening Revision, please by Margarite
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by JLauren
Who Nicked the Ring? by e.thoday
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by John Yeoman
A chocolate box poem by peggles
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by peggles
A True Princess by e.thoday
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by peggles
Late Learning by peggles
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by John Yeoman
Crafting a Plot by e.thoday
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by peggles
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